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Here we are, standing alone,
Just you and me, hand in hand
Staring at the starlit sky
Watching the twinkling stars
Our hands, like our bodies,
Lying next to each other,
With just a little space in between

I don’t want much from you, you say
“I just want to be alone with your smile”
A little while has gone by,
But we are still staring at the twinkling stars in the sky,
Your hand closer to mine now,
Almost touching

“Quit crying your eyes out,” you tell me
As you wipe away my tears,
Because you tell me you will never leave me
Your hand moves over mine, and I lightly take it
Please baby, hold my hand

Later on, you move closer to me
Soon there is no room between us
And then you roll on top of me,
Pressing me up against the grass,
In the stary night
Please baby, hold my hand and don’t let go

Pressed up against me,
Pushing me on the grass,
You clench my hand in yours
We can’t keep our eyes off of each other
Then you lean in, still tightly holding my hand,
Our eyes closing as you lean in
And kiss me for the very first time
Please baby, keep holding my hand
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This is probably the sappiest one yet, no matter what I've said about the one's I've written so far! I almost didn't upload this one, because I don't like it
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:iconx0falloutgirl0x:
x0falloutgirl0x Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2007
Aw that's cute...who cares if it's a little sappy...I write some sappy poems too. Its really nice...I like it.

“Quit crying your eyes out,” you tell me
+44 <33 :D
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ladyxsilver Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2007
You like +44, too? =D

I know, it's really sappy...but I didn't know what else to write <_>
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x0falloutgirl0x Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2007
i love +44:)...although i miss blink 182 :(
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ladyxsilver Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2007
*sigh* me too =(
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:iconnone-shall-save-us:
none-shall-save-us Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
awwwwwwww! *tears up* that is soooo sweet! I'm sure every girl wants that!
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ladyxsilver Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
Yeah... >.>
But I'm pathetic and only dream about it. Glad you enjoyed it ^^
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none-shall-save-us Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
lol.......you're not pathetic. Dreaming is what makes the world turn. Every one has fantasies, and I'm sure yours will come true! don't lose hope! *starts singing the 'Black Parade' chorus*
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ladyxsilver Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
o__o :salute: yes, ma'am...but that's hard...I think I give up <.>
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:iconnone-shall-save-us:
none-shall-save-us Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! *cries*
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:iconladyxsilver:
ladyxsilver Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
o_o but it's ok...I have my Frankie bear to give me love!
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:iconnone-shall-save-us:
none-shall-save-us Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2006
WOOO! Go Frankie bear! (whoever that is...:slow: )
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ladyxsilver Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2006
*cough*my teddy bear who I won at my birthday party *cough* <.>
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jackielfult Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
Why don't you like it?! I love it, so sweet. Sappy, yeah yeah, whatever. But beautiful and adorable, it made me smile. :]
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ladyxsilver Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
Because...well...uh...>.< I sometimes day dream of something similar happening to me...not exactly this, but similar. And the sappiness gets to me <.>
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jackielfult Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
It's adorable! Cute little daydreams :) Sappiness is excellent in moderation, don't feel bad!
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:iconladyxsilver:
ladyxsilver Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
<.<
>.>
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:iconjackielfult:
jackielfult Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2006
:boogie: lol
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alliiuu Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006   Writer
nice one :)
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:iconladyxsilver:
ladyxsilver Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
thanks =)
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Lady-Way05 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
aww thats cool!! :aww:
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ladyxsilver Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
Thanks...glad you like it ^^
I think I should stop writing sappy love poems <.>
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MistressWinter Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006  Hobbyist
-_-
You totally stole this from an experience I have had XDDD
"Pushing me on the grass" Yup.
But i am gonna :+fav: it because it makes me think of Gee. ^^
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ladyxsilver Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
o_o
oops...forgot about that...<.> I day dream about that happening to me at the park up the street from my house
>.>
<.<
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